i really really loved this story u did a great job!! the only thing is at the end what happened to her baby? u never mentioned it after that one chapter so we dnt kno if she had a girl a boy or even if she actually had a baby....but other that that i love it!!
awwwwwwww....... :( It's over... that makes me a sad person but honestly I loved this story and I loved the fact that even though they fought and that Val stood in the way, they still got together and they still loved each other and that now they are married everything is going to be perfect for them (hopefully xD)
I think I found a typo in Chapter 27, you said Nothing else was spoken between the three of them... and I think you meant "two of them"? I read that and was just like, WOAH, who's the third person? Other than that though, I really like this story - just like I like all of your other stories that I've read. I'm glad that they're slowly getting over the Val thing and are moving on. I can't wait to read what's next!
Make-up sex! Make-up sex! Make-up sex! lol I can understand that Val needs closure, but Matt has to be careful not to be emotionally bent up about Val and her needs.
Shit, Jena and Matt are gonna argue once Val leaves because of what Jena said. Jena had to get it off her chest, but I know Matt didn't want Val to know the hard truth of it all.