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  • a grave mistake.

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    Still loving this!
    May 21st, 2012 at 01:26am
  • a grave mistake.

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    I was just thinking about this story...so glad to see an update! :D
    March 12th, 2012 at 12:16am
  • a grave mistake.

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    I'm happy that this is back!! :D
    November 25th, 2011 at 05:19pm
  • CourageKeeper

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    Please I dont want this to be the end :(
    October 11th, 2011 at 09:15am
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    No, this can't be the end! There has to be more!
    Somehow, some way, there has to be more!
    It can't end this way!
    July 25th, 2011 at 05:00am
  • AshleySixx

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    So, who was the one who ended up telling the cops? you kind of left us on a cliff hanger on that one.
    Btw both stories were great, the ending to the first one was really sad :(
    and this one has an unhappy ending too, but it was a great story, both of them ^.^
    July 18th, 2011 at 07:02am
  • tommo.

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    :((
    It's so saaaad! But the story has been great and so have the others! Whoop, cookie out!
    June 29th, 2011 at 04:47am
  • Butterfly_Angel

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    Awww I feel all cheesy and gooey now for helping out in this story x3 I'm sad this is over but it was a great bulid up to the end :)
    June 29th, 2011 at 02:07am
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    but but but but but now I'm sad.... she got rid of Thomas's baby! =(
    April 24th, 2011 at 03:19am
  • a grave mistake.

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    Awww, I feel so bad for Emma.... I was really excited to see an update, though!
    April 23rd, 2011 at 06:26pm
  • tommo.

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    Wow. Poor emma :(
    April 23rd, 2011 at 05:15pm
  • Butterfly_Angel

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    I love reading this story and 25 to Life was just as awsome!!! My ideas for chapter 17 are:
    Emma should give up the baby
    Thomas should get mad and go on a rampage accidently hurting Emma
    Thomas can't handle the guilt than decides to run away
    Emma goes on a search and finds him under a bridge crying.

    Thats all I got for a layout of ideas
    April 7th, 2011 at 05:20am
  • shelsyatsix

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    I agree with Thomas.
    March 11th, 2011 at 05:44pm
  • lemonspirit21

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    TEAM THOMAS!!!!!!!!!!
    March 11th, 2011 at 02:12am
  • a grave mistake.

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    Yay! An update! I think they are both right in their own ways. I think Emma is right for wanting to protect her son, but on the other hand, I think abortion is wrong. I can't wait to see what happens!!
    March 10th, 2011 at 05:45am
  • tommo.

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    Thomas is right!!! Abortion sucks x]
    and it would make this story like, 500 times more interesting lol
    March 10th, 2011 at 04:09am
  • Bludgeoned.Brittany

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    ooooh i think emmas preggers
    yay!!!
    and i say keep the oliver show ups lol
    and yah i dont think guys act like that either lol
    But the chapter was amazing and i need more!!!
    so update
    March 5th, 2011 at 09:25pm
  • a grave mistake.

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    I love the Oli appearances! I can't wait to see what happens!! <3
    February 28th, 2011 at 01:52am
  • Kaulitz_Liebe

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    <3
    February 27th, 2011 at 04:46am
  • tommo.

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    Keep the Oli appearances hehe ^_^
    February 27th, 2011 at 04:42am
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