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  • Sweetest Blasphemy.

    Sweetest Blasphemy. (100)

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    Your description is absolutely wonderful. And your ability to draw a reader in, even when writing a monologue, is wonderful.
    I've seen many writers get so droll and droning in their monologuing.

    Not you.

    You keep the emotion and feeling flowing until the very end. You harness emotion and cause your readers to feel along with you.

    Marvelous, marvelous job on this piece. :3
    September 18th, 2011 at 06:34am
  • Brown Eyed Blues

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    D'awwww...This is like the cutest thing I've read in a long time.
    Loved it..it was real good..Well done
    January 16th, 2011 at 12:57am
  • Gail Vengeance

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    This kind of made me think about my own thiings haha
    I liked it a lot :) Good job!
    January 16th, 2011 at 12:37am
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