May 22nd, 2013 at 03:03am
This was depressing. But I loved it. [x
I loved everything about it, really. I adore happy endings, I really do. And I certainly didn't expect the final twist there at the end. I was literally on the edge of my seat, jaw-dropped, reading quickly, on the verge of tears. You were able to hook me into this story excellently, which is something quite hard to do. I admit, I wasn't too into it at the beginning, but I'm so happy I read on. It really is wonderful. Simple, lovely, to the point without it sounding rushed. I adore it.
But seriously. I loved this. I love their relationship and how, after he broke it off with her, he came back to tell her his true feelings. And I really love how you added flashbacks. I think it added to the story as a whole, and it helped when describing their past relationship and their characters. Amazing work!