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  • southpaw

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    This is beautiful. The repetition adds so much to it and emphasizes the metaphors so well, and all in all it was really sweet without being too mind-numbingly cute. Great job. :D
    October 18th, 2011 at 12:52am
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    aw!
    August 7th, 2011 at 10:37pm
  • CraigMabbitt

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    I like it. Its interesting, but it seems a bit like a prologue to a story, like it has more to come to it. It's very nice, though. :)
    January 17th, 2011 at 05:16am
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