I couldn’t believe it when I first found out this was the story I was to read. I had loved your previous Kingdom Hearts fan-fic, and this one was no disappointment. The description was well done and the story line was great. I love how it followed the events in 358/2 Days, it definitely made for an interesting plot and overall story, as did using some of the lines from the original game. The title was very nice; to be named after the flower Roxas gave to Axel. It would’ve been nice for more to be mentioned on Axel’s confusion over his new found feelings, but apart from that it was a great job.
I haven't got a damn clue on the topic of kingdom hearts. But this story was just...It was so cute and I really liked it. I could read more stories like this one, it was really good. I made me cry, it was kinda sweet. Good job ;) if only this was a chaptered story...
To be honest I know nothing about kingdom hearts, so it took a little more time for me to get through this and try to understand everything. More so than all the technicalities, I did get the main emotion from the writing, and while you didn't delve much into it, this was an incredibly sad oneshot. I'm not sure if it was a romantic love or just a best-friend sort of thing, but it was so painful to read about Axel getting bombarded with all these feelings, especially since he wasn't even supposed to feel them (from what I gathered) Especially the ending was just so heartbreaking, how he didn't even remember his friend who I suppose went to such great lengths to see him again. More than anything, it just made me think about who will remember you when you're gone. It's such a sad thing to think about, which is why I think it impacted me so much. Something I think everyone can relate to a little bit. Great oneshot, really. :)