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  • Neche Narcissist

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    I understand why she left.
    I'm not mad.
    I think it makes her smart and different that she stood her grounds and left.
    If it was real life and not a love story on here I'd find Cole stupid for staying for a boy but she didn't so im not as mad as you expect.
    Love this story and can't wait for the sequel.
    July 5th, 2011 at 02:12am
  • TwistedScars

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    OMG!! Now I'm back to feeling bad for poor zacky but just wow amazing chapter, very emotionally charged what a roller coaster ride..lol. Can't wait for the sequel!! Now I have to hurry up and shower because everyone is yelling at me because I'm holding up everyone going watch the fireworks, BUT no on understands that I couldn't leave until I read THIS chapter!! eh! they'll get over it and wait, the fireworks aren't going anywhere,Love the story, keep up the awesome writing!!
    July 5th, 2011 at 01:58am
  • Lua.

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    No! I cried... I don't want to see them part ways. I want them together, but I kind of blame this last fuck up on both of them. Zacky shouldn't have slept with that girl but Cole should have told him she was breaking up with Koi so he wasn't thinking she was walking out on him again, because she should have learned by now how stupid he could be. She should have told him then she wanted to be with him, I don't blame her at all for going to New York, but I want them to be happy .... Together!!

    Loved this story and I am super excited for the sequel! And for you giving them another shot at happily ever after... Once again together! Or so I hope :)
    July 5th, 2011 at 01:39am
  • Snowzuki

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    D: I can't believe it just ended D: and I don't know that image of Zack is so D:
    Can't wait for the sequel anyways >n<.
    Once again, you're a great writer
    July 5th, 2011 at 12:48am
  • alyv08

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    I cried..once again. I really can't wait for the sequel. It's going to be amazing and filled with emotions, I can already feel it. :')
    July 5th, 2011 at 12:35am
  • DeOkIe

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    im spechless just...why cant they just ugh, im still crying. i loved this story so much, cant wait for the sequel to start.
    July 5th, 2011 at 12:23am
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    I'm gonna cry ... But I'm not.
    July 4th, 2011 at 11:58pm
  • brianna7x

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    I had a feeling it would end like that. Cole is very stubborn and Zacky is just persistent. I loved it though! I really can't wait for the sequel to start!
    July 4th, 2011 at 11:57pm
  • Rodeo Babe

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    *TEAR* i cried again. Zacky tried and tried but in the end he never seemed to succed. Cole will learn in due time. she better not be engaged in he next story!!!!!!
    Anna
    July 4th, 2011 at 11:53pm
  • SpencerG

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    I cried!! I cried again!! This is the only story that made me cry like this!! I soooooo glad that I found it!!! <3
    July 4th, 2011 at 11:31pm
  • carelesswhispers

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    I can't believe it's over! I cried. :') I'm going to suscribe to the sequel right now!
    July 4th, 2011 at 11:25pm
  • laceyvengeance

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    Oh. My. God. The ending makes me a tid bit sad, but it makes sense..just if Zack hadn't fucked up...haha
    well, I love this story & cannot wait to read the sequel.
    July 4th, 2011 at 11:14pm
  • elsmyth

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    You should be proud of this story, I absolutely loved it! Can't wait for the sequel (:
    July 4th, 2011 at 10:53pm
  • zackyvravageme

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    Gahh!!! Just when they're ---> <--- this close to being together that girl walks out. Uggh! I'm gunna scream for joy when they're finally together haha
    July 4th, 2011 at 09:14pm
  • alyv08

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    *facepalm* Wtf Zachary?! He always messes it up when it's going great. Can't wait to see how he gets back on her good side after this one. Great update :)
    July 4th, 2011 at 07:29pm
  • leaving for good

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    OH MY GOD! I no longer hate Koi anymore. I kinda hated him earlier because he was dating Cole, but I thought that was really sweet of him to be so kind to Cole when she kissed Zacky at prom. But, REALLY ZACKY?! REALLY?! You had Cole, YOU HAD HER! But then you go and screw everything up by going and hooking up with some random whore! Everytime things start to go right he finds a way to screw them up. And the way Cole found out, so heartbreaking! She spilled her guts to Zacky and then the whore walked out. ): Zacky is going to have to do something really big to win Cole back again, but I think it will happen because they can't function one day without each other. I really thought they were going to work things out this time. :/ Can't wait for the next update. :D
    July 4th, 2011 at 06:10pm
  • thatcrackfox

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    OH MY GOD! How fucking stupid can someone be?! I mean, AGAIN? He fucked up AGAIN?!?! Oy vey... Why did he need to jump into bed with the first whore he found? That's so... bleghh! Cheap, backstabbing and disgusting! It was horrible the way she found out aswell! After she poured her heart out :( omg, I feel so bad for her! And he JUST got her back aswell! Ffs every time he does something right and moves a step forward, he does something utterly stupid that makes him move about a thousand steps back! This is so not cool. He actually needs to do something ridiculously, massively OTT to get her back. IF he gets her back! Although, they can barely function without each other, soo they really should end up together... Just my opinion though ahaha :')
    July 4th, 2011 at 05:05pm
  • BigDreamer

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    Dude, that was perfect! Actually I don't hate Koi anymore. At least he realize what was going on... So I think it's not Zacky's fault 'cause Cole was the one to walk away but I'm not saying it's Cole's fault. Can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon please! :)
    July 4th, 2011 at 05:04pm
  • sheraba

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    God damn Zacky! *takes out rubber baseball bat and pounds his head* REALLY? YOU HAD TO SCREW THIS UP AGAIN?! *groans* Well, this is going to take forever to sort out between Zee and Cole. I'm glad Koi isn't the jerk I initially thought he was, too. That makes me happy. But now Mr Zachary James Baker has some major damage control to do! Anyways, great chapter. I loved it a lot and I can't wait to see what's going to happen next.
    July 4th, 2011 at 04:36pm
  • AlVickyMim95

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    I really want them to get together, but Zacky keeps screwing things up and Cole is just to stubborn to listen. Gah, drama these days ;) Loved it anyways =D
    July 4th, 2011 at 04:04pm