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this one is soo not even zacks fault if cole wasnt so stubborn and stupid she would understand what happen she just doesnt get it she just doesn't if i was a guy and in zacks position i woulda done the same thing!

Zack is just an all around fuck up in this story most of the time! I want to just punch him in the fucking face so bad right now!! >:(
But I'm disappointed things ended nicely with Cole and Koi. I didn't have a chance to come in and make him disappear or some shit. But its whatever. *looks down and shrugs*
Great chapter though!! I wasn't expecting Zack to fuck up though. I'll just have to wait to see what's next but until then... ^_^

YOU YOU YOU YOU like to TOY with me dont you DONT YOU you you make me think its gna be alright and then its not and then it is then its not ARGH cole should just jump off a bridge and DIE she doesnt deserve zacky she NEVER gave him a chance she just doesnt understand she just doesnt she is so so so so stupiidd!!!! zacky should find better someone who will be able to understand him better and that will listen to him and not be stupid like cole!!

I was smiling the whole chapter until that girl came up. Poor Zacky fucked up again. I'm going to smack his head for doing that to cole! Damn.

Ahh..a drunk & sorrow fuck for Zack & yet another heartbreak for Cole...why does this surprise me and not surprise me at the same time? Haha..he hopefully comes up with something fan-fucking-tastic to apologize to Cole...

You love torturing me, don't you? Lol.

AH! Zack's a dick. What a stupid stupid boy. But I still really love this story!

D: what the heck!?!?!?! The chapter started out great! Koi let Cole go without any problems then it goes through the awkward moment of clod telling zacky she wants him and then it just goes down hill form there!!!!! But you what?! This is like my favorite chapter ever!!! Great update!!!:)

U just had to go and do that didn't you? Right when koi was being so easy about breaking up with her! Zacky has to be the stupid ass to fuck things up again! When are they going to be together? Fuck up! I had to read it twice! I don't believe it!

Just when you think he couldn't possibly fuck things up, oh look! A cliff! Let me throw myself off it and see happens! Great update!

Just when he got back on my good list well it didn't take long for him to fuck it up.*shakes head* And now he's back on the crap list,too bad zacky I don't even think he could apologize his way out of this one and even if he could,she shouldn't listen. Loved the chapter!!! Even if I want to hit zacky with a brick lol Update soon!!!

I started reading this story like 2 days ago and I just haven't been able to stop....haha.
I've said this before, but honestly, this is probably the best Zacky story i've ever read, ever. From the very beginning, it's just very well written and it's actually believable. I know it's "fiction" for a reason, but it still helps quite a bit when it's at least a little realistic.
I love the characters and their personalities, and the whole plot overall. It's unique.

The first "dream" that was at the Santa Monica Pier, before I knew it was actually a dream I was like NO! They can't do that yet, it's way too soooooon! But when I saw that it WAS a dream, I was relieved. I don't like when stories jump into that about 5 chapters in, because there is no suspense or anything. (Oh wow, i'm reading wayyyy to far into the writing of fictional stories, here -_-).

Anyway, long story short, I really enjoy this story.
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My internet messed up, so I have had to reread the full story from the beginning. I love this story, I know we will end up together but I'm loving the semi love triangle between Zacky, Cole and Koi. I was listening to Jessie's girl when I read that bit. Spooky :)
Anyway it's amazing as always :) So keep up the good work and please update soon. I really can't wait for the next installment.
Jodie xxx :)

wow! it just keeps getting better and better! keep doin what ur doin. hope you update soon plz

SO CLOSE. SO FREAKIN' CLOSE. Stupid Koi - every time I picture him, I picture this big Indian guy that was in my college English class last semester who overshadowed everyone.. he was REALLY smart, but a little slow on the uptake of things sometimes. Cole needs to dump him!
I loved the chapter where Zacky and the guys put on a show - it was so sweet, and COME ON, what girl WOULDN'T be swept away by that?
Anyways, you're still doing great with this story, OBVIOUSLY. It really says something for your writing ability that all of us reading are so engaged and keep coming back - and that it's hard to guess what is going to happen next!
:3
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That chapter was amazing. Zacky is trying so hard! And that kiss or kisses holy cow, that was intense. I wonder what kind of hold Koi has over Cole, if he's threatening her or something? Can't wait for more :)

Fuckkoi!! He is becoming a nuncence and he doesn't even talk that much in the story!

I Love These Types Of Chapters. Update Real Soon!

Sweet mother of Tomo! That was an emotional roller coaster that chapter was. I mean I upset that Koi was being protective, happy when they were kissing while dancing, mad when those bitches call Cole a slut, excited when they started kissing again, then finally mad when Koi called Cole.

You really should just let me be in story for one chapter. It could just be a news report about the violent deaths of the blonde and brunette whores from the prom and the disappearance of me and Koi. Make sure that I leave an anonymous note somewhere saying, "the girls where going to tell everyone" or something else equally mysterious and cryptic. Nobody will ever see Koi again. Problem solved. You know this is a good plan as well. This is better than my Carter plan. I'll slip something in Koi's punch during the prom and while Zacky and Cole were outside, I'll tell him "I'll take you to Cole" or some shit and then BAM! He's out cold from the drug and won't know a thing. YES! Great plan!! ^_^

Anywho! Again this chapter was an emotional roller coaster. But loved it! I can't wait to read more but until then... ^_^

NO! Make her leave Koi!!!!!!!!!