A Marriage to the Vampire Prince? - Comments

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I really want to bitchslap alex. What the hell is his problem with calling her a hoe and a bitch just to say sorry? Ugghhhh DX

UPDATE PLEASESESESE@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! bahhhhhh i wanna find out what happens!

I miss this one too..

New York!! Woot! That's where I'm from! haha!
Good story. I like it. There were a couple of chapters though where I saw Ian instead of Lee maybe, but other than that and a few spelling errors it was good. I'm excited for NY!!

I see you still haven't updated! :( are you going to finish the story soon?

GREAT UPDATE!! I'm glad they saved the girl from anymore torture.

Thank goodness she was saved ; ) Update soon lol

This title is as well dumb.

This title is as well dumb.

Im glad your back I like this story too, update soon ; p

ha, i just came home from a cruise today. :o anywayyyy, please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update this storyyyyyyyy!!!! wow that's a lot of pleases. i fucking love this story, please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please updateeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :P

Great update, although it felt too short! :( I'm happy that your back! :D

I'm commenting in return to your comment swap journal.

So, I read this one since it was the first on the list and I imagined you had just updated. and I only read chapter one since that's the length of my story Valen. (which is the one I want to swap with.)

Anyway, I like the plot and the idea of the whole thing but I feel that the first chapter was a little rushed. And oh my God xD Selena just seemed so spoiled hahaha but I like the way she like brave in the matter she doesn't give a shit who the prince is.

I spotted a few grammatical errors but nothing to big:

**My parents named me Selena because it means moon and i was born with a birth mark shaped like a moon on my the left side of my stomach. (My parents named me Selena because it means moon and I was born with a birth mark shaped like a moon on the left side of my stomach.)

**I was talking about vampires because of course i live in a world with vampires and humans.
(you didn't capitalize the I in various sentences.

**Also, because the town’s latest gossip is Alex king, prince of the vampire throne come home at last.
(I think it would sound better like this: Also, because the town's latest gossip was that Alex King, prince of the vampire throne, was coming home at last.

**also, I think Lance is such a smart ass which is funny xD.

Besides that, I think it's good. Keep up the good work.

i looooooooooooooooooovvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeeeeeeee this story it's awesome.
Along with ur other 1's write more plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

i am reading it an it is good

I LOVE THIS SOOOOO MUCH I MEAN THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST STORY'S IVE READ PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE ;D

oh snap!!!!!!! did NOT see that coming!! :0 and your welcome! :) P.s. now im worried what dereks gonna do to selena! *bites nails* update when you can!

Loved it PLZ keep up all UR stories there fantastic!!!!!

Ahh man, your such an amazing author! I really love this story! Update again soon<3