I love her family. they're so laid back and cool, and Jack's right: her mom is really pretty! and i love how you developed her as a character, and you did such a good job doing it! you're an amazing writer, and this is an amazing story.
four-six: awesome descriptions for all the chapters since I forgot to mention that. Loved the song pretty and reckless; yours? Wondering wants going to happen next? Can't wait to find out.
one-three: awesome story. But I think that she was kinda quick to be buddy-buddy with them; mostly Alex even if it was two years ago. about the songs in 2 & 3 (and maybe any other chapter as well); are original or by an artist (if artist; might want to give credit at the a/n. I LOVED the entire song in 2 and the verses in 3. Can't wait to read the next chapters.