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  • MistressSimone

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    Wow, this was really powerful, and you have an amazing way with words. Some of the expressions you use are pure poetry! And the story has the most incredible realism about it. Well done--I really loved this one. I'll be reading your other work soon!
    September 19th, 2008 at 07:27pm
  • trecool567

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    I didnt read all of it but m gonna subscribe XD (i didnt read all of it because im really tired and ready to go to bed ^^ ) also continue please its good and u need more comments XD
    February 15th, 2008 at 03:12am
  • tyler farr.

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    I really liked it too.
    You should continue.
    *subscribes*
    January 22nd, 2008 at 02:33am
  • vibesss

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    I really liked it, and thought it was original. I think you should continue the story. I'm really interested to read more.
    January 22nd, 2008 at 01:28am
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