The Hourglass - Comments

its a bit strang4e but i like it

This is good, I like the whole theme and idea, it's dark and interesting,

I like this so far. It seems like a good beginning. I love the very idea, though. Even your short description on the story page caught my interest and made me want to read. I can't wait to see where this is going. The beginning seems kind of confusing, but all story beginnings pretty much are. I still can't wait to see how this continues and what happens with Ebony in this new world. I love the name Neverend for the place. It's ominous, but still very interesting. It reminds me of like, the dark side of Neverland.

looks interesting, i wanna see where this goes.
Very ominous.