A Spark Of Inspiration - Comments

Love the update <3

I adore the last update.
It reminds me of my struggle to find a job, it really does <3

He's a bit of a jerk but, not really.
He's just kind of misunderstood.
Great update though
Really great.

This is really interesting and I especially liked the way you structured the first chapter, it creates a sort of endearing abstractness which makes my mind boggle a little bit when I try to pinpoint how. You've created a very potent character in such a short space of time and I looking forward to see more from Max's perspective.

I only have one criticism and that is that the page layout makes it tricky to read. Perhaps if you widened the margin in the writing area so that there is a gap between the text and the edge of the screen it would be easier.

If you ever fancy reading my story 'White' I would really appreciate it and any comments/suggestions.

Great start.

Amazing.
I get how he feels - he's lost and he has no idea how his future is ever gonna get into shape.
Just incredible.