After Party - Comments

I liked it.
I liked how secretive it was, because of course, it wouldn't be right for Robert to be cheating on his wife with Emma, who's what, 22?
I do so love your style of writing, and how poetic it is.
Anyway, if I keep talking, I'll just start doing the "wlderguihwliug4toijd;sgrehg" thing, so yeah. Loved it. Love the layout. Love RDJ and Emma.

This was amazing. I liked the banner so much I want it for myself.

Emma fought hard to keep the guilty blush from her cheeks whenever people brought up Roberts earlier speech. Should be Robert's. And you had a capitlization error a bit later on, but I'm sure they were typos. This is just amazing. Really good, short, snappy, sweet, and hella sexy. Good job. :)

OH MY GOD.
Let me begin with that, the picture. Is. AMAZING. The lady in it reminds me vaugely of the lady who thought my year to dance before.

I'm not a fan of sex in stories, it just doesn't appeal to me at all. I think this was really well written. I felt quite sorry for Susan in the beginning of the story. That he'd cheated on her. I rather wanted to slap him in the face for cheating.

I got somewhat confused in the middle, when like, it turns out they hadn't shagged in the bathroom. But it passed.

On the whole, I really liked this, even though you're not the biggest fan, I feel you managed to capture the Robert Downey Jr-ness quite well.

This is amazingly written, and I'm definatly saving that picture.

i like this layout, the banner picutre is cool,
especially because it moves haha :)
Though i have no idea who those people are
so they had like sex in the bathroom kinda thing?
I did like this :) though i was honeslty kind of confused
you're writing is always wonderful though,
and it showed through with this :) as all your other pieces do

This is really lovely.

I do just have to comment on thr layout quickly, as I've never before seen a gif layout that really works. But this is perfect - it doesn't detract from the story and the black and white looks amazing.

Your description is simply beautiful. I adore some of your phrases, and my particular favourite has to be,
"Their lust is masked by heavy doses of perfume and cologne, his treachery stored away for later regret."
It's so poetic, and it just feels lovely to read; I can't say it in better words, but the way you write is just something that just feels so comfortable and easy to read because it all sounds so flowing and natural.

But I also love the way that you make it feel like what they're doing is slightly naughty. The whole wsy you describe the teasing and flirting as it develops feels very playful and fun, but still keeping it classy and elegant. It's really interesting - the smoothness of your writing with the playfulness of the intimacy.

It's absolutely lovely.

you have a really unique writing style! its cool! and i love the gif, its so seamless, like a proper gif!
i like Robert's sharpness, and his "line"....hehe

i also like how it kinda cuts from one scene to another, from sex to story

well done, i like it

Ohmigosh you are amazing for writing that.

I really love your writing style. You do a really great job with the descriptions and imagery, which helps put the story in my head.

"See you later, Mistress." I really liked that line.

And do worry about getting the personalities right. Sometimes you have to be out of character to make a fan ficiton work.

I don't normally review and it's also 1:30 am on my time so please excuse my incoherency, but:

HNNNGGGGGGH.

Just, everything about this has an air of sharp eroticism, with just the right amount of details to vividly describe what's going on but not to overdue the piece. I can't speak for Emma's personality, but Robert is spot on, specifically the "See you later, Mistress" quote. Quick, simple, and sexy. I absolutely loved it. <3