Machinery, Take Thy Dream - Comments

  • xlittlexmissxmcrx

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    It's crazy! But I do like it :) Hehehe! Please do continue! :-)
    April 22nd, 2011 at 02:29pm
  • Evil.Red.Head

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    Damn, that was intense...really intense; keep it up...that town is insane - maybe even crazier then Connor
    April 14th, 2011 at 05:57pm
  • Evil.Red.Head

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    This is a really great story, looking forward to the next update!
    April 13th, 2011 at 08:41pm
  • Requiem.For.A.Dream

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    3 I mean XD
    January 20th, 2011 at 03:47am
  • Requiem.For.A.Dream

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    omg! I LOVE THIS! *sparkly anime eyes* great job on the proloug! it really drew me in! and teh first chap was amazing Saya sama!! and the 2end chap as well! theres only 2 parts but I'm already wanting more!! *-* Keep up the awesome job!!
    January 20th, 2011 at 03:47am
  • KobeBryant

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    I like this! It's rather well written and the plot is definantly original. TheShadowSKill: you would write about the song Her Morning Elegance...lol

    Keep up the good work! You have a subscription from me.
    January 19th, 2011 at 10:11pm
  • Michael Scott

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    I like this story. Good start with good descriptive text. Keep up the good work.
    January 17th, 2011 at 06:32pm