Out to Discover - Comments

Oh. My. God.

This was bloody brilliant.

I am a co-judge of the Darker than Disney contest and I rate this a 7 out of 10.

I love the idea and how it is much different from what you would expect, and how you tied in this fish hunting with actual hunting. (Which I think is barbaric, cruel, uneeded, and down right disgusting way for men to pretend that they are stronger than everything in an angry way of killing and taking the lives of living things to feel powerful) But in the end of course the evil mermaid kills him. mua hahah, vindictive.

Good Luck!

wow, that was really dark.
but that was very excellent!
The whole idea of that was great. :)
I liked it a lot. Oh the layout was very pretty, too.

Wow, this was awesome.

I love how it ties into the original movie, but the ending is so much more realistic.

'Cause we all know mermaid's drown us in a second. *nods intelligently*

Dang, now my entry seems way super long.

Epic. o.o
Sexy, eerie, dangerous but yet so addicting.
A very good short story.