Can't wait for another one :D I totally think she should end up with Zacky, or atleast something happen with Jacoby so she spends time with Zacky again - I love them both though, lol I'm happy with whatever happens!
I love that your worried about only updating once or twice a week, but that is still heaps in my opinion! I congratulate you :)
this is only a small comment cuz i really should go back to revising *looks at textbooks and sighs* but Im glad they all behaved like adults and didnt rip the shit out of each other. Neither would look good with a broken nose :P Oh la la, Coby and Elsie gunna get some action! Woo hoo!
yet another great chapter and I cant wait for the next one :) Xx Sas
Oh, oh, oh!!! Drama timeeeeee :) ok, before I forget, I LOVE this line... ...and sometimes you got to choose, right? And I had chosen Jacoby[/] MOTHERFUCKING YEAH SHE DID!!!! Sorry, I love Jacoby :)
but yesh, anyways... Man, New Years parties are the best! New Years Day's are the worst :/ They are just such a cute couple! I can just imagine their giant grins when they are near each other, and the obvious happiness when they are together... I LOVE THEM! and oh la la, incomes almost-ex-boyfriend! Poor Zacky. He's probably been hoping the entire time that next time he saw her, she'd be all lovey dovey and ready for a relationship with him, but noooo... Jacoby got their first :) I just wanted to hug him when he turned all sad and depressed cuz he knew she was off limits. Naww.... Oh, who's at the door?? I can feel a fight between two sexy men coming up :):):)
Good luck with the job hunt! and the whole teaching thing! I know how you feel about the stress cuz i have half yearlies coming up this week that account for 1/4 of my HSC mark. Yay for leaving school :) cant wait till next time! :) Xx Sas
Cliff hanger much? NOW YOU HAVE TO UPDATE!!! I wanna know what goes down at the party!!! I have a lil inklink a certain sexy, tattooed, left handed guitarist might turn up :)
But that was a great chapter! i like how you actually skip time, instead of writing through all the boring stuff and head straight on to the drama and excitement! It makes the story too damn addictive! Damn, they make a hot couple! and so cute too! I can imagine them just spending all day talking, basking in each other's presence NAWWW!!! Aint that the life? :P I like Jessica too! She sounds like that friend you have that you love to bits cuz she covers your ass, has your back, but still tells you what she really thinks, and doesnt sugar coat it I like her! :P
Cant wait to see what happens at ze party! Oh la la :P XX Sas
I think I'll take making you disgustingly happy as a compliment :P and yeah, tired as fuck is a common feeling atm. yay for life :/
NAW! she went well with the parentals! YAY for Elsie! all that stress over nothing :) Coby's mum sounded so cute! like, typical awesome mother that took care of owwies, cooked and cleaned, and those a-typical housewives in movies. I want one :P Aw, poor Zacky :( hes gunna be pissed when he finds out about their relationship :S But he'll have to man up! :P Oh, now i wonder whats going to happen in the next chapter because of that damn last line you wrote! bum...
Well done you for updating even when your dying of exhaustion (claps) Xx Sas
I totally understand about the whole dead tired/busy as fuck thing its a shit! i got my hsc (final yr of school), all teachers thinking their subject is the only one, 2 major works, friend issues, family issues, a job working on both days of the weekend, and not enough time to do everything thats why this story makes me happy. it takes me away from stress... i love it!
but, this chapter was far from lousy! we all need to put in a filler here and there, or it would be action all the time, and that can get kinda old and overwhelming at the same time when reading. you need to add the cutesy/sexy time moments to contrast the drama... (you cant tell i went on an art excursion today, can you? :P) Meeting the parents? good luck Elsie... thats rarely fun... kinda cements the relationship in a way, saying 'your not just another conquest, but im actually, genuinely interested in you as a person'... Yay for Elsie and Jacoby! :P
you know where i stand on your questions. I do admit that i think she'll end up with Zacky. Coby, though he's a cute as hell bf, and just too amazing, i feel like he's more of a bffl, and that their past may hurt them when they break up, going through that awkward stage, but they will become stronger because of it, and Coby will accept Elsie's relationship with Zacky I want her to end up with Coby though :P what can i say, im a sucker for him :P
Hope that wasnt too much rambling for you. Tired Sas = talking about shit half the time :P as always, keenly awaiting the next update :) Xx Sas
YAY!! YOUR BACK!!! Im glad you had an awesome holiday! and congratulations on being an aunt!! How exciting!! i want one of my sisters to get preggers so i can play with the baby, but hand it back when its being cranky :P
WOO HOO!!!!! They are together, they are together!!! (Imagine that sung. makes more sense in my head) But wow!!! that was an intense get together scene... i wonder how zacky is going to react... probs drink though his pain, poor dear.. BUT YAY! GO JACOBY! :P this totally made my day...being sick sucks ass :(
wow...the font of the person above me looks like my friends hand writing... random note, but it distracted me OH NO! your going on vacation? RUDE! :P just kidding! i hope you have a lovely time! i know im going to be dying of jealousy :P
nawwwwwww!!!! now im just dying to hear what Jacoby is gunna respond to that! its a little bit of a bombshell to drop, even if he feels the same way and i would love to trade houses with him! his house sounds amazing!! again, dying of jealousy :P
i hope you relax and enjoy your holiday dont forget us back here in mibba land :P Xx Sas