Kiss It All Better - Comments

Your writing style is absolutely breath taking and beautiful. I love their relationship, and how for a change, we see the world through a scared boys' eyes. It's not a girl looking for solace, it's a boy. And that's rare. Your descriptions of his emotion, of their relationship, were absolutely brilliant. Your writing flows effortlessly and is easy to follow. Your characters have depth, along with your writing. Overall, this story was just breath taking and wonderful. Definetley rec'ing it.

I so adored this story. It is so good and the ending is cute. I actually wrote a story with the same title and found your story and of course, I had to read it. I'm glad I did. Loved it. Maybe you should read mines as well. It is called Kiss It All Better: A Short Love Story, based on the same song Kiss It Better by He Is We. Hope you try it out! :)

Another He is We fan

This is amazing!(: I loved it! There was so much detail and etcetera. I honestly think this is the best so far!(:

This was really, really good. Can you say tough competition?(:

When I read this, I thought it was really sweet and deep. You clearly have a knack for writing these kinds of stories and I thought the ending was the cutest. (:

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