Sex and White Lies! Handcuffs and Alibis! - Comments

  • w.w.w.

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    i realize its pretty pathetic that i read this whole thing today but i couldnt stop reading it was amazing! i loved it and i do plan on reading the sequel. :)
    January 16th, 2012 at 07:34am
  • Boxerbabies14

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    I don' think Jack and Brooke Lynn should've broke up. they were perfect for eachother! //':

    But keep up the good work, i love it, [:
    August 3rd, 2011 at 01:18am
  • Boxerbabies14

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    Team Jack!! xDDD
    August 3rd, 2011 at 12:20am
  • Boxerbabies14

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    oh my gosh. i absoulutly love the song. i looked it up on Youtube, and now it's my addiction, xDD

    Keep going, it's amazing!! :D
    August 3rd, 2011 at 12:02am
  • Beauty Fades Always

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    This chapter was really good(:
    July 14th, 2011 at 09:16am
  • Bludgeoned.Brittany

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    this chapter was really good:)
    cant wait fer you to post chapter. ill go subscribe right now:)
    July 14th, 2011 at 05:05am
  • LifeisFiction

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    well you're fingers did well and wrote an awesome ending and damn that was intene i loved it <3
    July 14th, 2011 at 05:01am
  • Captain Steve Rogers

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    OH. MY. GOD. This chapter was fucking amazing!!!! HOLY SHIT. I can't even. You better update tonight or tomorrow!!!!!! ;)
    July 14th, 2011 at 01:41am
  • akanevampire19

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    WOW! Last chapter was a BOMB! I love it!!! The kiss with Alex was unexpected and the fight awesome! hehehehehe XD
    July 14th, 2011 at 01:07am
  • Captain Steve Rogers

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    Awesome!!! What would be cool is if like Alex realized he had to accept it so Jack tries to get her back, but she is already in a new relationship with like Damon or Cody or something, and yaaah. IDUUNO :) It's your story. I love this though!
    July 13th, 2011 at 09:58pm
  • Beauty Fades Always

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    Ahah things are gonna get spicy(: moreeeee please(:
    July 13th, 2011 at 09:20pm
  • Bludgeoned.Brittany

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    oh busted :D
    haha i liked it
    update:)
    July 13th, 2011 at 04:14pm
  • The Mini Monster

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    I want more. ):
    July 13th, 2011 at 04:01pm
  • xnightchangesx

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    I love this story!! :)
    Please post update soon..
    July 13th, 2011 at 02:57pm
  • Music-for-life

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    dun dun duuuuuuuuunnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!! lolz update soon i really like this story i think you should continue from this chpter cuz it makes no sense creating a sequel when you havnt even finished this one
    July 13th, 2011 at 06:08am
  • LifeisFiction

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    It's sooo difficult to decide....on title...and all....
    July 13th, 2011 at 02:28am
  • akanevampire19

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    You update again! Great!!! =D =D And by the way that's what a massive cliffhanger! =S hehehehe =D
    July 13th, 2011 at 02:19am
  • JustAnonymous

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    Noo! I liked Jack :( But I guess I'm okay with them being friends...
    And yes there should most definitely be a sequel!
    July 12th, 2011 at 09:41am
  • Beauty Fades Always

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    How could he break up with her? Wtf he could of just told his bestfriends.... Friends really? What a douche bag.. And yees i think there should be a sequel
    July 12th, 2011 at 06:03am
  • Bludgeoned.Brittany

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    jack is an asshole. Brook Lynn should have kicked him in the balls >:[
    oh btw thankies fer the pic of damon it made me happy lol
    update:)
    July 12th, 2011 at 04:05am