January 25th, 2011 at 02:58am
I love the title. That’s what originally drawn me in. And then I clicked and saw the it was a P!ATD story and that made me like it even more, haha. I like the simplicity of the banner and layout, I think it has just the right amount of detail and flair.
I really like Amber so far. I can relate to people seeing and thinking of her as a loner even though deep down she has a really fun and vivacious personality. I hope her true personality presents itself when she’s touring with the guys, that would be really sweet.
Four heads full of brunette locks turned in our direction, smiles over taking each of the owner’s face. - I really like that sentence, haha. I thought it was funny for some reason, about all of them being brunette.
Anyway, I’m totally looking forward to see what happens next. I’m predicting a romance between some of the characters. I’ve never read a story about a merch girl so this is going to be new to me. I’m looking forward to the next few updates!
I love this story. :b
update sooner, love?