Some Milk - Comments

aw omg this was so great. a great bit of slash, well written, and funny too. i really loved the smut part, you write sex well and it's definitely nice to read aha! i like the characterization too, good job all around! i'd love to read a full story with these characters too. <3

This would make a dope story! :D
Awesome one shot!

Hee Hee, you called his slit a pee hole. (:
But it was good. :P

u should make it into a story
yep u should

HOT

i liked that. :p
i think it's good as a one-shot. but that's just my opinion. :]

*blush* I...LOVED...it! <3

Fucking hot!!!! It should def. be a story. Ray sounds so damn dominant. ^_~ I'm gonna be lame and subscribed, okay? :] OMG with the fat-free(lol I almost spelled it fart-free)milk. Ooh I want to find out what happens next. What ever happened to the gum that he was chewing?

Good story. As to continuing it...If you have a decent plot idea then I'm sure it would turn into a great story.