i agree with rbucky, the short chapters r nice cuz u dont hav to read any blabber. plus u can reread it easier :) dont worry if u dont know where its going, its awesome so far, dont give up!!
Who cares about the lack of ambition of this story? The chapters are each excellent, though short, and this story completely skips the usual, tediously boring buildup to some overused plot device. Thanks for that!
ooOOoooh. Sexy kissing in the rain! ;) Haha. The story sounds sad right now because she's in the hospital. D: By the way, Kate is CUTE (in a non-lesbo way). ^^
I have to admit that it was the classy layout and picture that made me interested in this story. Haha. But I like the vibe you got going with the first chapter. ^^