Well, I will be honest, this was´t my favorite chapter, I read that you have to re-write it, and I understand, but I thought that the end could be better, I don´t, it sounds like the good byes didn´t meant nothing... The rest of the chapter was great! But the end not so much!
And I´m just saying it, because I belive that you will take like a constructive critics!
Hey! May I say that I´m loving the story?? I just think that the chapters could be a little longer, but if this is your style, I understand! I´ll be waiting for the next part!!
Well, I will be honest, this was´t my favorite chapter, I read that you have to re-write it, and I understand, but I thought that the end could be better, I don´t, it sounds like the good byes didn´t meant nothing...
The rest of the chapter was great! But the end not so much!
And I´m just saying it, because I belive that you will take like a constructive critics!
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