If I Should Fall, Would You Catch Me? - Comments

Wow! I must admit, this story took me on a whirl wind of emotions and thoughts! At first I thought it was going to be quite similar to your other one that I read, and then I thought for some reason that Sarah was running up the stairs to surprise her love with a proposal, and then for sure I thought Jimmy would save her. Boy was I ever wrong! I will admit however, that I apperantly stopped breathing while reading the final paragraph! I didn't even realize it until I read "I'm free.", then a big gust of wind flew out of my lungs!

Well done! I must say that this was written very well!