Awe groundage sucks for all. I hope one of those plots for Maxine is a reality check and for Hannah some self esteem. cc: <3 Can't wait for the next update!
Wow it took awhile to catch up. Lol! Kandi is cool; I like her. She's chill. :) Hannah is only cool with Carlos, any other time she's just annoying with her 'everybody is lying' bit. Honestly she needs to just love her self a little bit. Carley in kinda in between the rock with me. I don't think Kendall told her to go for Jordan at all. At least that's not what I got from that conversation. I go that he was telling her to be careful. And she didn't listen. And the best for last: Maxine, I relate to her the most but I'm actually humble and I don't think I'm the shit. Seriously, she isn't some Goddess that was punished to live with mortals. I think she needs a reality check. ASAP. BUT with all the criticism do know that I love every bit of the story! I'm just giving my opinion. cc: <3 Excellent work; really.
As if this only has one page of comments. New reader, started it yesterday and just finished. The story is wonderful. I love the interaction between all of the characters, especially Logan and Kandi. Maxine unsettles me and seems like a complete bitch, but at the same time I understand where she is coming from in some instances. I have a soft spot for Carlos and probably always will - he's just so adorable <3 The writing is excellent and I love that you've all stayed so true to the show. Keep it up :)
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