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  • StarAngel171565

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    I think that the baby should be a girl.
    Hopefully Bill and Avery get back together soon, they really love each other.
    Update again soon!!
    August 8th, 2012 at 07:17pm
  • angeleyesful

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    update please
    August 6th, 2012 at 10:24am
  • LolaRoxUrSox

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    Why Bill? Whyyyyyy? D: Loved the update, I can't wait for the next chapter! :D This story is so well thought out and is just plain amazingggg!
    July 29th, 2012 at 10:51pm
  • Rainbow_Smiles

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    Ohh this is so sad :( Can't wait to see what happens next!
    July 28th, 2012 at 11:20am
  • nissarevenge

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    No! Bill why would you do that! Even though I think you were drugged but why fall for it and let her backstage.
    July 27th, 2012 at 01:56am
  • MoMo_92

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    Don't get mad at Bill, Avery if u noticed his ass is either drunk or drugged don't leave Bill not when u r pregnant god I hate tht fucking psycho bitch she needs to leave and die 2 Guns Avery think about what u r doin ur not thinkin clearly becuz u r upset but u can't leave Bill becuz of tht bitch and u knew she was goin after Bill in the letter soo u should be mad at her and not Bill, too much drama in one chapter can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    July 26th, 2012 at 11:31pm
  • TheRockshowChick

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    I love reading this story it is amazing. I don't usually like a whole lot of drama in a story but with yours it's super good. Keep up with the good work & update soon please? :)
    July 26th, 2012 at 11:23pm
  • RoyalCrystal

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    Grrrrrrr. I cant believe it!!! Why??? Please update soon please! :)
    July 26th, 2012 at 10:29pm
  • angeleyesful

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    Continue please
    July 26th, 2012 at 10:14pm
  • AngelCakes666

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    update please!!!! I love this story!!!!
    July 5th, 2012 at 11:16am
  • ladyvanvan

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    Bill really did cheat on Avery, for anyone who was confused.
    July 1st, 2012 at 03:35pm
  • billabbytokita483

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    As usual i love the story but question in the begining did bill really cheat on avery or am i readin somethin wrong but in any case i loved it
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    July 1st, 2012 at 08:47am
  • MoMo_92

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    Love it, Bill and Avery wanting to have children hmm I think they will have cute children, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    June 24th, 2012 at 11:10am
  • LolaRoxUrSox

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    Ahhhh I adore this story soo much, and awesome update by the way. :)
    June 24th, 2012 at 07:41am
  • nissarevenge

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    Ah!! I've misse this story so much!
    June 24th, 2012 at 04:05am
  • angeleyesful

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    Please continue
    June 3rd, 2012 at 06:54am
  • AngelCakes666

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    update please!!!! it's been aggggges!!!!
    May 30th, 2012 at 03:39pm
  • nissarevenge

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    Aww I was afraid your chapter would get deleted
    April 16th, 2012 at 11:04pm
  • AngelCakes666

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    Update please!!
    April 16th, 2012 at 03:32pm
  • G4U15_2009

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    Woah what happened to the chapter????
    April 16th, 2012 at 05:26am
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