Like I said, I really wasn't sure why you wanted to make this a two-shot, but it wasn't bad. You showed the love through a sex scene. A none smutty one. It was actually really good. The sex scene was very sweet and well, I loved it.
I loved the vows, I absolutely adored it actually. And Matt looked completely dashing in my mind. The chapter flowed nicely together. I love how I could almost feel what them both are feeling. The ending was great and happy. I'm not even sure why you're making it into a two-shot, but by all means go right ahead and impress me further. =) It was beautiful and romantic and sweet. I loved it.