The Day I Met Synyster Gates - Comments

I did? Hmm..I'm going to go check it out and redo it. Thanks for telling me. :)

-Britt

In chapter 3 you say Syn is the drummer? He's the lead guitarist.

Haha!! I know, right? xD I'm glad you loved it though. :)

Yea Brittany just leave it at the kiss... PFFFT. <3 Loved it.

OMG! He wants to kiss her! I can not wait for the next chapter :D

Aww! Thanks! :D

Loved this chapter <3

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Thank you Melissa! :) I like your stories too. You should really become an Author. ;)

I love this so far. (:

Awww! I love your comments @ Kezabell and @teenagedream91 You girls are awesome and know how to make a person smile. :) But, yeah, I'll probably end up editing my 2nd chapter. :)

I think this is really good considering it's your first story, and you know what they say- Practice Makes Perfect. As time goes on your confidence will grow and you'll find your own writing style. And remember if there's something your not happy with you can alway go back and edit/re-write it, nothings set stone. Good luck with future chapters & keep up the good work girly =)

I agree and maybe you can add more emotion to when she saw Brian. Like how her heart fluttered or her stomach twisted in knots or something like that. Overall for your first sorry it's actually better than some of the ones I've read. :)

But thank you for the tip. :)

Ah, yes I should, but being this is my 1st story, there's probably going to be alot of mistakes. :)

I think if you separate the paragraphs, it would be easier to read.
As well as when there's a conversation. You should separate that, too.