Hey looks promising! Can't wait for more, Matt is Bi-fucking-polar. I think he is afraid of losing her, just as he lose his parents, maybe he is angry for I don't know what shit. but poor Paisley... she doesn't deserve that :(
Different and endearing ...keep writing but I think you should do a quite once over it before you post.Lots of spelling errors and punctuation stuff that are wrong.
Really... An update would be good! :D