Control This Ride - Comments, page 5

synderella. (100)

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Okay, pleaseeee do not leave me waiting for so long next time! Things are getting good! Who knows what'll happen at that party? (;

February 21st, 2011 at 06:22am

howellrebec (100)

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Omg. When you cut it off before they got the party I almot screamed. This story is fantastic and I can't wait for the next update! :D

February 21st, 2011 at 04:50am

amyEternal7x (100)

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Loved it! <3

February 19th, 2011 at 05:16am

i_love_rolo_cookies (100)

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He's falling in love with her!! He's falling in love with her!! Mwahahahahaha. I hope she realises she's being bitchy 'cos she wants him and she doesn't like that idea. Mwahahahahahahaha.
Ahem. Sorry. Had to do that. Anyway. I love it. As per usual. You are a freaking star!!
More soon? Please?

February 14th, 2011 at 03:06pm

asylum's riot. (150)

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I feel so late. :/ oh well.
I can't think of anything Brian related and sarcastic to say. :/
I'm having issues with my life besides your stories. (Right? I wouldn't have thought I had a life either)

February 14th, 2011 at 04:24am

PhoebenPaige (100)

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I love this story i love that he is fightin her feelings lol

February 13th, 2011 at 06:54pm

Miss_ChaoS (100)

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this story is awesome. i love it

February 12th, 2011 at 03:07pm

ProjectAlxisRose (100)

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Update soon, I am really digging this story.

February 11th, 2011 at 06:03am

khuckles (100)

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She owned him in that burger joint! But what's going on with the tension between the girls? I have a feeling that will come up again, but worse... Keep going!!

February 11th, 2011 at 12:41am

unholy confessions;; (100)

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I love this, it's just so addicting. :)

February 10th, 2011 at 04:55pm

hmc09 (100)

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love it! :)

February 10th, 2011 at 11:44am

Queen of the Clouds (4955)

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I really love the way you casually sprinkle humour in the story. If you keep it up, which I really hope you do, you should add "comedy" to the list of genres. Favourite part would probably be when Matt quickly defended himself about watching Mean Girls lol the image of him watching a chick flick is hilarious!
It's also good to see that you're conveying their hate in other slightly different way to the reader, rather than repeating "I hate her/him" in the chapter. As I read, I can still sense their hate, even though you haven't stated it, so good job. :)
I don't have anything bad to say. There's nothing to improve on at all in that chapter. It was just amazing. End of story.
Absolutely loved it, so please update soon! :)

February 10th, 2011 at 04:27am

maioia (100)

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this's fucking amazing.... I've a feeling nxt chapter will be eventfull right,right,right?!
U said that comments encourage u to write...well here it's... I'm commenting incase u didn't notice :) so update sooooon like really really soooon

February 10th, 2011 at 03:38am