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  • colibri

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    everything is*
    May 21st, 2010 at 04:17pm
  • colibri

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    The only real problem is sometimes the punctuation, and the way sentences are put together, but other than that, the plot and everythings awesome. I love how I'm writing this a year after you posted that comment... :D
    May 21st, 2010 at 04:16pm
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    I love this story. (:

    a Fred romance I hope?
    May 21st, 2010 at 04:15pm
  • OnceUponATime01

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    Hello, all!

    So, how are you all liking this story so far?

    I would adore it if you left praise or criticism, especially criticism. As a Virgo, I am quite the perfectionist and would love help on how to improve. :)

    Sabina
    January 31st, 2008 at 03:22am
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