Anti Hero - Comments

what i really like is that i don't need to know anything about the video game to understand this. it makes perfect sense without knowing. i love the part about him not owning a horse and how his parents would tell you the truth. it actually makes me more interested in his parents' story than his.

This makes me think--oh wait, two people already said that. XD

But you do need to write more, because the fact that it ended there was a complete mindfuck and I kind of really, really want to read a story out of this. Like, maybe a parody of Zelda or something. I would fer sure read that. So if you ever do make something like that, let me know, ya hear? ;3

I agree with "Mistaken Identity".
It's thought-provoking.

I actually like it. Sort of intrigues me, makes me wish there was more. XD