The Five Steps - Comments

Slap Happy Bullet:

i have to admit,
everytime i read a new addition to this story,
i put in where is my mind by the pixies.

it's just beautiful in this awkward way, you know? just like the song...

that is my dirty secret.
*slaps wrist*

ha ha h thanks..a lot of ppl tel me its beautiful..we tend to find beauty in the ugly truth..whoa look at me being all quotable..

i have to admit,
everytime i read a new addition to this story,
i put in where is my mind by the pixies.

it's just beautiful in this awkward way, you know? just like the song...

that is my dirty secret.
*slaps wrist*

Ridele:

i think it was my favorite.. and almost transcending in a sort of depressing way. like how do you explain that?

the part with billie laying the rose on his father's casket.. that was amazing. tears even welled up in my eyes. your description was beyond any adjective i can think of. it's not even the fact that it's billie and it's true (although that was the half of it).. your words just completely captivated me.

Wow...me too, that part was beautiful. Really beautiful.
But yes, go Mike, run, run as fast as your lanky legs can carry you...
Oof...I smell love coming up.

i sure hope love's coming up...seeing as we've reached the final step...lol

i think it was my favorite.. and almost transcending in a sort of depressing way. like how do you explain that?

the part with billie laying the rose on his father's casket.. that was amazing. tears even welled up in my eyes. your description was beyond any adjective i can think of. it's not even the fact that it's billie and it's true (although that was the half of it).. your words just completely captivated me.

Wow...me too, that part was beautiful. Really beautiful.
But yes, go Mike, run, run as fast as your lanky legs can carry you...
Oof...I smell love coming up.

OkDavey:

Ah to be in love....

thanks

Ah to be in love....

Graffiti:

Run, Mike! Listen to your Billometer!
We all knew he has Billie Senses....
I heart you. :D

ha ha ha...you're a goob...but i love ya anyway :hug:

Run, Mike! Listen to your Billometer!
We all knew he has Billie Senses....
I heart you. :D

Slap Happy Bullet:

oh wow ash.
that was an amazing chapter.
i think it was my favorite.. and almost transcending in a sort of depressing way. like how do you explain that?

the part with billie laying the rose on his father's casket.. that was amazing. tears even welled up in my eyes. your description was beyond any adjective i can think of. it's not even the fact that it's billie and it's true (although that was the half of it).. your words just completely captivated me.

wow

THANK YOU!! I'm so glad someone mentioned that part That was one of the hardest parts for me to write. It almost brought me to tears and that's a very hard thing to do. This part may be short and have no dialogue but I wanted to show that you need no dialogue to write something amazing. Thanks for liking it.

The final part is coming up soon...

oh wow ash.
that was an amazing chapter.
i think it was my favorite.. and almost transcending in a sort of depressing way. like how do you explain that?

the part with billie laying the rose on his father's casket.. that was amazing. tears even welled up in my eyes. your description was beyond any adjective i can think of. it's not even the fact that it's billie and it's true (although that was the half of it).. your words just completely captivated me.

wow

THIS STORY IS AWESOME!!!!
me likes

PsychoRomantico:

I like this...lots.
More pleasssseee......

thanks sweety...i love new readers...

I like this...lots.
More pleasssseee......

This is real good. lol u must get sick of reading stuff like that! U have so many comments!! But u deserve them, fantastic story! =)
Morgz xx

ha_ha_you're_screwed:

I'm actually reading this on the community clean live journal, I just finshed it and it's in my memories. =D

you're on Coming Clean???
whats your user name???
i love finding people that read my slashon there on Mibba...

I'm actually reading this on the community clean live journal, I just finshed it and it's in my memories. =D

Slap Happy Bullet:

wow...
great. great. great.
i want to stand on my chair and scream it!

i'm really excited for the rest of this story, ash.
tis awesome.

thankies! XD

i got the final 2 parts coming soon..

wow...
great. great. great.
i want to stand on my chair and scream it!

i'm really excited for the rest of this story, ash.
tis awesome.

Ah, a smile... I think I needed that after all the sadness of this story... I mean, jeeze! Sigh... hopefully, Tre can tell Beej and Beej will go see Mike and it can all be all happy again!
<3
Ha ha... I know, I know... no happiness till the last part... I can dream, can't I?

Lol. *loves*

This is great=)
More soon