I loved the original :D This was probably my favorite story of yours! I miss her being Sophie though :( I thought that name was sooo cute ^^ but the context is still great. Extremely well done, as usual :]
Okay so I was going through my subscriptions list and I found this story again, and reread it. The dark aspect of it is creepy, I'm not gonna lie, but the way you've written it is scary hot.
And the innocent way Sarah and Mikey interact in their friendship is a really good counterpoint to the darker stuff going on. When Mikey first talks to her about being careful of Gee, are you hinting that Gerard has done something to Mikey before? Because that's the vibe I was getting.
Anyway I really hope to see more of this story, because it's totally fucking awesome. Keep up the great work Killjoy!
I swear I where this story like two or three years ago on here. I swear. And I know everything that happens. xD Need less to say, I liked it, so that's why I came back looking for it and I remembered that it had a sequel too.
Wow.... Okay so I thought this was going to freak me out, and i I think about it too long it probably will, but DAYYYUM it was hot. Seriously, twistedly, and mind numbingly hot, Update soon. Please!!!!!!
Bring on the worserness! Theres gerard and mikey way, pervertedness, and wetdreams wrapped up into this delicious twisted dark ball! where have you been all my life?!