Shades Of Manner - Comments

HONESTLY BEAUTIFUL :o

Oooh wow this made me go :O
It was reaaaaaaaaaaaaallly good!
beautiful! :D

To each their own. I took my major and this is an old piece. So yeah. =D

this is not beautiful.
creative use of ridiculous vocabulary.
it is not attractive for the average person to have to frantically search every other word in your story on dictionary.com. i'm sure it would be a gorgeous piece of writing, had you focused on getting the story across to your readers, rather than on your obvious high level of vocabulary.
keep in mind that the majority of your audience spend their time on mibba reading simple frerards, with words often misspelled where the extent of the writer's vocabulary is "fucked, gerard, frank, closet, in, and, the." (not nessecarily in that order, but you get the point.) sorry if i come off as a bitch.

This was absolutely, and utterly beautiful.
I've never been touched by anything like this before.
Well done. It was amazing.