I really love this story. It's so cute, and I like how it isn't rushed.
I do want to warn you though, you're not supposed to have anything other than the actual title as the title. Some people throw fits about it and will report it. So you may want to take (A Kris Letang Story) out of the title. I'm not going to report you or anything, because I think it's an author's choice. But i just felt like I should warn you.