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  • Formosa.

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    Ouuuh UPDATE?! :3
    November 5th, 2011 at 10:32am
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    oh god im in love <3
    subscribin'(:
    September 2nd, 2011 at 06:54am
  • Colorful_dinos

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    Yay!! You updated I hope she gets with Ben
    September 1st, 2011 at 07:07am
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    update! damn it!
    July 10th, 2011 at 08:00am
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    update!
    July 10th, 2011 at 08:00am
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    please update!
    July 10th, 2011 at 08:00am
  • ShadySunshine

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    Love the storyyy! (: It leaves me wanting moree&morre. Hope you update agaain sooon. I'll be waitinggg. :D
    June 10th, 2011 at 11:38pm
  • Colorful_dinos

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    This is...LEGIT!!
    I freaking love this continue :D
    April 28th, 2011 at 04:09am
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    ajdfkasdfghjksghdlj;ashdf
    I really, really, really, really, really adore this. :3
    I think Carter's a bit... jealous? Awwwwh.
    Update soon, love. I need to know what happens. c;
    April 19th, 2011 at 11:42pm
  • Tyrannosaurus Shawn

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    This story is pretty good, normally I get a little irritated with a lot of swearing, but they do it entertainingly so its not bad! Hope you post more soon!
    April 19th, 2011 at 09:09am
  • broskees.

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    This is so fucking entertaining! :D mooooore please?
    March 20th, 2011 at 08:24am
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    wooowww!! thanks, haha that is the best comment i've gotten on any of my stories!! you are my new best friend!! lol THANKS!
    February 21st, 2011 at 06:31am
  • weed demon

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    Wow, this story hasn't gotten many comments. >.>
    I just read all five chapters, and I absolutely adore it. c:
    The characters were developed really well, and I love where you're going with the plot. I can tell that this is more than just your average fanfiction. Most fanfictions make it so that boy meets girl, then boy quickly falls in love with girl after not even a day, then boy asks girl to go on tour and girl says yes. ;P But you gave the characters a backstory. You gave them a life before tour, and that's why I love what you've done with the story. :D

    But a bit of constructive criticism; their accents don't actually sound like that. The way you're making them speak makes them sound almost... Cockney. Though Cockney accents are actually much harder to understand, but I digress. I might be wrong, though, being that I'm not English. However, to my untrained American ears, a Yorkshire accent sounds different. xD

    But other than that, the story is absolutely wonderful. It was really well-written, too. And you don't find many well-written fanfictions on here. ;D
    February 21st, 2011 at 05:25am
  • AskingMelissa

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    Bands they've already been on tour with so they have history together and its more likely they actually tour together
    February 2nd, 2011 at 01:31am
  • AskingMelissa

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    So far I like the story I'm kind of mixed up on if Willow likes her sister Roxy
    January 27th, 2011 at 06:54am
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