Telephone - Comments

wow! this story is amazing! dont be dissatisfied by it, its amazing, and a good interpretation of the song. I am a huge gaga fan, so thats what made it even better, you should be proud of what you have written!

Well first and foremost I will like to thank you for entering my contest

I thought this was a good interpretation of the song. Better then what she did for the video because it actually relates to the lyrics. There were a few grammatical and spelling errors but nothing too major. I enjoyed the fact that she hated how clingy he was and how he wouldn't stop badgering her, but in the end she still came back to him and she apologized. I liked the fact that you gave it a happy ending you know.

Once again thanks for entering and the results should be up after February 1st unless someone asks for an extensions so keep a look out for that.