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  • Checkmate Joy

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    Well, from the two stories I've read, I'm pretty sure that the main character is always going to end up killing herself.
    January 28th, 2013 at 09:32pm
  • Mystic Monster

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    A theme song for Peter seems to be Monster by Skillet. I was listening to it as I read this and thought "yea that sounds like Peter" (I'm only on cig so if it doesn't later my bad)
    October 22nd, 2011 at 08:02pm
  • Looking_4_Angels

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    well, the end was morbid. But I loved it! I loved the whole thing. The end was sort of unsatisfying. U seemed rushed and trying to cut it short. She SHOULD have a happily ever after though. All in all: 10/10 stars. Great job
    May 14th, 2011 at 02:29am
  • tchalla

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    Ending made me cry. )':
    April 24th, 2011 at 12:43pm
  • EarthParadise082397

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    love the ending it so not chessy ! :D
    April 18th, 2011 at 04:14pm
  • Burgerat20

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    intense!!!
    April 16th, 2011 at 12:03am
  • simple'nsolo

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    The ending's jacked up.
    'Tis sucks.
    April 15th, 2011 at 06:55am
  • sereani

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    Ugh. Typos. Damn Zune. -.-
    April 15th, 2011 at 05:58am
  • sereani

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    I just read all of this is one sitting smart bawled like a baby afterwards. I'm sad you ended with Kira dying. A sequel would've made my life worth living. XDDDD Seriously, I want to go try writing an idea inspired by this a bit. Topicwise. I'm not a plot stealer.

    But yeah, it's funny. Is it strange I kept routing for Peter until the very end? O.o"
    April 15th, 2011 at 05:57am
  • lollipop102

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    Woah...AMZING!!!!!!!!!
    April 15th, 2011 at 04:10am
  • iHeartRAWRmusic

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    I have literally been sitting here for about 2 minutes with my mouth hanging open....she killed herself D: but wow....what an amazing story <33
    April 14th, 2011 at 03:18am
  • tanyavsqz

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    Wow, great ending!! Sad that she killed herself :(
    April 13th, 2011 at 11:38pm
  • catzumi_zero

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    Oh my god. This story left me Speachless
    April 13th, 2011 at 08:09pm
  • Inuyashaluv

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    nice story! so sad at the end though T_T
    April 13th, 2011 at 12:11pm
  • MusicalCiara

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    omg, she killed herself! Tragic but beautiful... keep it up!
    April 13th, 2011 at 09:57am
  • simple'nsolo

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    PLZ DO CH 50!!!!!!!!
    50505050505050505050505050505050505050505050505050505050505050505050505050505050!!!!
    April 13th, 2011 at 03:24am
  • animedoll

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    can't believe it's the end. D<
    most definitely one of the best stories (only if i may) of mibba.
    same with denial, and i'll definitely be looking forward to your new one.
    April 13th, 2011 at 02:54am
  • XtremeFairy

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    I cant believe peter killed sarah :0
    I wonder what's going to happen when kira confront peter??? Great update :)
    April 12th, 2011 at 04:38am
  • Plan To Live FoREVer

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    Ahh..noooo....it's coming to an end..*pout*...okae...-sigh-...though i know it will end this awesome series..but i can't wait for the chapter..!! :]
    April 12th, 2011 at 12:33am
  • tanyavsqz

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    This should be a movie! I love this story!
    April 11th, 2011 at 11:18pm
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