A Boob - Comments

Aw, this story was adorable (':. When I first read the title of this story, I was like "A boob? Huh, weird." But, I think I get it now. Did Carolyn have breast cancer and lose a breast? I'm pretty sure that's right, but I'm not positive. I really did like the story though! You're stories always have a good storyline to them. You know exactly how you want them to end, and I love that. I hope to see more stories posted up sometime from you! :D <3

i loved it :)

I enjoyed this story. I'm glad that he went back to Carolyn and that he didn't do anything he would've regretted too much :)

I like happy endings :)

Awww, that was great! I'm really happy with the ending.

Wow, I didn't expect Thomas to walk out on her. In a way, I'm kind of proud of him, well, if he's going back to Carolyn that is. What I'm thinking at the moment is maybe he just wanted a sexy, young woman to make him feel young again? But, the next chapter might change my opinion. Great chapter though (:
Update when you can! <3

The story is coming to an end really soon! :O Ah, well. I'm really anxious about the next chapter, I can't wait to read it!
Update when you can! <3

Awsome update!
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So I see him and Carolyn are growing apart. Well, I guess it will only hurt her less in the long run if they grow apart :P How old is Thomas by the way?

My god, your writing is amazing. This chapter was fairly interesting. Thomas is pretty infatuated with Shawna, haha. Sucks for Carolyn! Lmao, good chapter though (:
Update when you can! <3 oh, and if you haven't read my comment on your "Love from, Hell" story, I suggest you do. I wrote a lot of thoughts that I hope encourage you to continue the story sometime (:

This is amazing, you get the characters, the emotions and the setting into my head it is an amazing story. I wish I could write like that. Please continue!
Jen
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I loved that chapter. I was insanely obsessed with Phantom of the Opera when I was younger, I have the DVD of the film and CD and everything. I've just never been to see it in London, unfortunately.

This story is good so far :)

I'm really enjoying the story so far. Your other stories are amazing too, I'm currently also reading your "Love from, Hell" story. That's going pretty well too ;D Subscribing to this one!

I think it's going to be fairly obvious what I'm about to say but that's only because you're a really good writer.

Of course I like this, plus it seems different from your other stories and it shows you can write well even when the persons point of view that you're writing it from is older. That sentence I just wrote didn't seem worded at all well but you'll understand my meaning aha.