What the Hell - Comments

what the end? soo lucky you guys have a sequel lol or id go nuts haha
i fucking loved this story and i cant wait for the sequel XD
love how they all look at her markign but wont tell her what it is lol
LOVE THIS!!!

It was a bit confusing, but I still managed to get everything
So, the mark is from the clan the other guys are from
Jimmy somehow branded her, but how is the question
He didn't seem to know about it himself
Zacky didn't seem too happy about Rib being there
Can't wait to see what's going to happen
Hope you update soon :)

Sad that it's ending but i do love it. Can't wait for the sequel

awww they have to split up :(
loove this!!!
and btw the day your getting the tatto i will be seeing a7x XD

Oh god....they have to leave each other?
This was gonna be hardest on Riv and Honor
They are best friends and everything
And for Riv it's gonna be even harder, she is not only leaving Tuck and Honor, but also Matt
I really can't wait to see what's going to happen now
Hope you update soon :)

Ps. You always mixed up the use of the apostrophe and the plural of words. You should check your chapter for that again.

I love it. Sad that they have to leave each other though. More soon?

did jimmy mark her?
loove this XD XD

Oh and I forgot to mention one mistake I found in my last comment. “Maybe your right – just to be on the safe side,” -> I guess you wanted to use you're

Hm, I wonder why Honor 'avoided' Riv? Maybe she didn't want to have an outburst around her
She didn't want to hurt her, probably
Oh....maybe while Riv was around Jimmy or Matt, she got marked....
I don't know.....but it definitley sounds like the deathbat
I really can't wait for more
Hope you update soon :)

Love it More soon?

lol love how shes like your so cold honor but i lvoe my enw hair lol
looove thixDDDDDDDD

McKenna is hilarious I loved it more soon?

Mhm, I really wonder what's the cause of all the lords coming closer
I mean, it does seem like she's the cause, but Brian and Johnny seem to think different
So, he didn't know perviously that she's a vamp?
The guys reaction seem to say that
And it might not be such a bad idea if the three join the guys' clan
They would be a lot safer than being without a clan
Can't wait for more
Hope you update soon :)

Oh and there was one thing that bothered me, Brian's sister's name is McKenna and not McKenzie. But other than that I didn't find any mistakes :)

Wouldn't have guessed that she broke that many rules when she went to see them
But it seemed that she did
Poor Riv, she must feel shitty, thinking that she was the cause of this
And that Honor had such a past with another vampire like this, falling in love and everything....
I really can't wait for more
Hope you update soon :)

I loved it babe. Poor Riv she must feel horrible. More soon?

loove this XD

I loved it. More insight on one of their pasts, very nice. More soon?

Hm, I wonder how Honor will react when she finds out that Riv went to see the guys
She defnitley sounded quite angry...
But I wonder what got Zack so angry...
Haha, Matt's quite the charmer
I really can't wait for more
Hope you update soon :)

Zacky's a very angry person. Matt made me laugh. More soon?

ohh sexy jimmy lol
loooove this xD