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biggest load of shit ive ever laid eyes on really.

aha you know im joking caz ;)
well im not.
youre a good writer.
but still my blood boils you know?
not that ive read any of it after reading it that first time a couple months back. oh no.

your writing is amazing (:

This is amazing, your witing gave me goosebumps.
In the most positive way possible.

This is pretty cool. It keeps the reader hooked because you dont know who the guy is. Update soon.

Caroline.
Wow.
Its strange because I know where you are when your talking about this.
And just wow babe.

I feel like I'm inside your head.
And I love the way you write too, its quite poetic, it just seems to flow.
I dunno, you just capture emotion so well.

Ag gorgeous, you've done it again.
Smacked me in the face with your amazing-ness ;)

hey, i'm looking for a bit of feedback .
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