you should so continue this into a story!! that'd be such a sick beginning to a story and there would be so much action and it would just rock!! i could see brian coming back from fighting (a ton of chapters in about the war, him being the last standing. then he could go home and help a girl out, maybe he goes to a certain part of a beach or a park and so does she? and she's got sone problema. or he could see her boyfriend or husband hit her in public and he steps in. spmething rad like that. this was soooooooo awesome!! and thats really cool that you're in the navy. thank you :)
February 22nd, 2011 at 02:57am