I liked this a lot; I thought it was cute and light and I just enjoyed reading it, which was the goal of my contest. I didn't see the picture I gave you anywhere in the story, which was disappointing because that was sort of the whole premise of it, but, I loved the story so much that I didn't even really think about that until the end.
I liked the banner picture, first of all. He's just all cute and I wanna hug him.
The story progressed well - if not a little rushed - and flowed pretty smooth. It was a cute and light read.
Nice job!