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  • angy_something

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    ohhh Zeus i cried i was sooooo sad it just brought Jimmys death and it made soooooooo sad that hes now gone foREVer
    March 11th, 2011 at 08:57pm
  • Wolfies

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    ALSO:

    I felt totally bad for Jimmy when she died only knowing her for like two weeks.
    It's sweet and, sad. They fell in love so fast and he thought she'd be alive for so much longer.

    And, then I felt bad becuase he blamed himself becuase of what he didn't know. ._.

    So sad.

    Also, it was hard watching Jimmy die since he really is dead.
    Glad she came back for him though.

    -Sanders
    March 11th, 2011 at 07:43am
  • Wolfies

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    I like this story. :3
    Sure it was sad that she died. But it wasn't some fairytale ending. It was more real in my opinion ^_^
    I would have liked to see it go on longer. Honestly I thought you were going to have Jimmy want to have a fast wedding and some things be planned out before her death. But, I like that her death was something they/we wern't to exspect. :3

    -Sanders
    March 11th, 2011 at 07:32am
  • figwmwrtbb

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    Awe I liked this chapter :) it was sweet :)
    March 11th, 2011 at 03:20am
  • BlackAndRED.

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    I bawled last chapter!
    LITERALLY!
    But this chapter made me cry happy tears this time!
    (:
    March 11th, 2011 at 01:04am
  • BlackAndRED.

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    I bawled last chapter!
    LITERALLY!
    But this chapter made me cry happy tears this time!
    (:
    March 11th, 2011 at 01:04am
  • narc0tics!

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    You made me cry! I actually cried while reading this!!
    But I love how they ended up together...even though they're both dead but it's a bittersweet ending
    March 11th, 2011 at 01:03am
  • DropDeadAlyssaa

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    I love this chapter, I knew you wouldn't end it like that. And now they have entirety together. <3 This was for sure my favorite story ever. I'm just so sad it ended so soon.
    March 11th, 2011 at 12:58am
  • figwmwrtbb

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    T~T NOOOOOOO!!! :( I mean I knew it was gonna happen but I didn't want to believe that it would :(
    Poor Jimmy he was happy then it got taken from him :(
    I don't hate you but I wish that she never died.
    March 10th, 2011 at 11:13pm
  • DropDeadAlyssaa

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    NOOO! D': I cried whole reading this. I feel soccer for Jimmy. ): Ahh, so soon. I like the ending, I jet didn't expect it to end so fast. *sigh* it was a good story while it lasted.
    March 10th, 2011 at 10:51pm
  • AlixInWonderland

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    NOOOOOOO THATS SO SAD!!! She's all gone and stuff poor jimmy jam :'( I can honestly say I cried while reading that...
    March 10th, 2011 at 09:04pm
  • PSYCHOsickness

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    Aww its sad but I like these endings better then the happy ones. :D
    March 10th, 2011 at 05:12pm
  • KellShadows

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    Noooo, it can't be the end! =(
    March 10th, 2011 at 09:24am
  • Baby.Blue.Eyes

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    I can't believe Hayden died :( but I am curious about the epilogue!
    March 10th, 2011 at 07:08am
  • narc0tics!

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    Ok so when I first started to read this chapter I was likeyou sick bastard why would you Jill Hayden than I started to think you wouldn't do that!
    But I finished this chapter and I was pissed!
    WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU WHY WOULD YOU KILL HAYDEN?!?
    March 10th, 2011 at 03:32am
  • angy_something

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    ohhhhhhhh shit whyyyyyy does this had to happen everything was practically perfect
    March 10th, 2011 at 12:15am
  • standingintheneon

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    Dang it!
    I knew something bad was going to happen. I just knew it! :/
    Why must you torture us?!
    March 9th, 2011 at 05:41pm
  • figwmwrtbb

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    Oh no Hayden! She's gonna be okay right? Please?! They were so happy then BAM! you have to go ruin it :(
    More soon please :)
    March 8th, 2011 at 12:39pm
  • AlixInWonderland

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    OH NO HAYDEN!!!! I hopes she's okay I totally love brians little no showing of weakness thing its completely adorable :D
    March 8th, 2011 at 05:26am
  • Wolfies

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    Making us cry? DX Nooo.
    Lol. Honestly I don't care if see dies in the end I think it has to happen, no? x3
    I mean isn't that something we already know? She's gonna die. I think this is a cute lovely story.
    I'll be sad to see it end whatever the ending may be.

    -Sanders
    March 8th, 2011 at 04:55am
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