Now I'll Never Know - Comments

  • MixMatch

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    This is really good. It pretty much tugged at my heart. Everything felt so real and the song went with it perfectly.
    April 23rd, 2011 at 07:35pm
  • PinkMartini

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    Review Time!

    So. This was sad, I shall admit. When I got done reading it, I was disheartened. I have a friend who's planning on going into the military and I always tell him 'No! Don't die!'. I mean, there's no guarantee that he would... But still. It happens. Anyways, I really liked it. The characters felt real, even Dash. And I don't think you made any mechanical errors, so yay!

    Now for the negetive(s): Personally, I'd rather song-fics not have the lyrics put out there, especially big chunks of the song. So, I pretty much just skipped over those parts and went on to the story. That's the only negetive I have... So, great job!
    March 14th, 2011 at 11:26pm
  • SmurfGirl

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    I am so crying right now...that was so heart breaking. But very well written it flows just fine. And that happens to be one of my fav. songs by Carrie Underwood.
    January 27th, 2011 at 01:57am