Riley Jones - Comments

Almost immediately I was hooked on this when I clicked on it. The fact that Clint was so dead set against Riley from what I read in the summary from the get-go just made me really want to read this story.

The first chapter was not a disappointment to me. I love how Clint described everything that peeved him about her, and even the little things. I think it's so funny that he noticed all the small things and pointed them out, it just makes me think that maybe he doesn't really hate her, because would someone that hates you really really take all that time to remember the things they hate about you? It would have to be a really, really strong hate. xD The fact that he had kissed her once kind of made me

I wish you would update this.

You've got a minor tense issue in the last sentence of the second chapter (first, if we're not counting the prologue as one), but I loved the prologue.

I love Riley already :P, Clint names makes me laugh only because I'm an immature five year old :) I'm subbing.

Quite interesting. :D

I love on how Clint is pointing out every single little detail he hates about Riley. I love the fact that Riley buys vintage sweaters. <3 :3

*subscribes* (:

Sounds good.
Can't wait to read the next chapter :D