I really love your writing style. I also really enjoy the way things got tied in with each other and I really hope you update soon.m I can't wait to read more and see what happens.
first of all, I love how you write. i mean that. The way you describe, the clothes Tay is wearing, how you describe her feelings. I love how you wrote about the past, so we know what is going on. How she is running away again, and the very end how it was Jordan. This is such a short and simple fic, and I love how you get the point across without dragging it on. Even tho it isnt that long, I enjoyed reading it, because of how you described everything and also who is in it. I mean who wouldn't want to read one that involves Jordan and Tay! :)