i thought it was gonna be BDSM but then I was like oh this is good too...maybe brian should just be like "Nope I want someone else not Michelle." I liked this and i cant wait to read more of what you write.
When I read the whole 'Master' thing, I was kinda expecting to be some kind of BDSM type of thing, but was very pleased to see that it was nothing like that. It was very intimate & personal between them & I liked that. It was a great surprise. I loved how, even though, he´s to marry someone else, he loves this 18-year-old girl. It's just great. I don't know why it took me a year to read this! It was great. I can't wait to keep reading more of your stuff.