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  • Fire and Ash.

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    I love this story! I hope you update soon! I wanna know how the whole Demetri thing will work out. :D
    July 9th, 2014 at 02:51pm
  • SBurgundy

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    Comment swap brought me here because I honestly have no interest in slash, or Twilight for that matter... sorry. But anywho, I like your sentence structure even though I think it could be a little more descriptive. But I say a little because it's good the way it is. You have an obviously loyal fan base so keep up the good work!
    March 31st, 2013 at 07:28am
  • DisenchantedLullaby

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    Pleeeeeeeeaaaaaasseee update!!!
    March 26th, 2013 at 04:19am
  • FallenCreature

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    Awesome xD
    Noah and Paul are so cute c:
    February 14th, 2013 at 09:18pm
  • a lonely robin

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    I don't regularly come to Mibba anymore, but when I saw this was up I just had to read it. The chapter was great. I loved reading about Renesmee and Noah hunting. :D
    February 14th, 2013 at 04:44am
  • Writer_Girl14

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    Sequel please. I think it'll be a good idea. That i'd love to read
    January 24th, 2013 at 06:38pm
  • DisenchantedLullaby

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    I would totally love a sequel
    January 24th, 2013 at 05:37am
  • a lonely robin

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    Don't have much time to leave a comment. I really enjoyed the chapter, it was great to hear from you again. I didn't quite expect what happened with Kate, but it was really interesting! I would love a sequel. :)
    January 21st, 2013 at 07:12pm
  • Sarcastically Blunt

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    Interesting. Classic drama. Greatest part of stories. Update soon please
    January 18th, 2013 at 10:09pm
  • FallenCreature

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    So Demetri is a good guy, or is at least meant to be?
    January 18th, 2013 at 08:25am
  • pinkpanther012895

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    Yay! Them kissing makes me happy. Cant wait for the next update. :)
    January 18th, 2013 at 05:15am
  • rainydaydarkness

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    I FRIGGING SWEAR I WILL. THIS WAS SOOO GOOD.
    I love fucking polkadotperfection for bringing me here!
    January 5th, 2013 at 11:31am
  • rainydaydarkness

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    I FRIGGING SWEAR I WILL. THIS WAS SOOO GOOD.
    I love fucking polkadotperfection for bringing me here!
    January 5th, 2013 at 11:31am
  • rainydaydarkness

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    BUT I NEVER READ TWILIGHT FANFICTION.......
    and I never like werewolf shit.....
    but this is so goooooooddddddd
    I am eating this up like candy. I love the concept of the love quickly idea.
    LOVE HAS NO TIME FRAME. IT JUST FUCKING HAPPENS MOTHAFUCKA
    KAY UPDATE I WILL SPAM THESE COMMENTS.
    January 5th, 2013 at 11:30am
  • a lonely robin

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    Just now getting caught up with my subscriptions...Been waiting for this one for a while! Ahh! :D
    This chapter got really cheesy at times but I loved it <3 (Y'know, the normal cheesy romantic stuff. It's cool.)
    January 5th, 2013 at 02:00am
  • n3n3j0y9

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    Lovedddd it update pretty plzzz
    January 4th, 2013 at 03:37am
  • Sarcastically Blunt

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    Quite interesting....Love does strange things to people. Update soon please
    January 3rd, 2013 at 06:10am
  • FallenCreature

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    Well Noah is sure damn protective! ;)
    January 2nd, 2013 at 09:39pm
  • he's the reason why;

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    Sooooo I think it's safe to say I missed you as these amazing updates? Noah and Paul are just jdjavhsmcnxk lol
    January 2nd, 2013 at 10:58am
  • animeQT613

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    FINALLY AN UPDATE!!!! They are so fucking cute!!! I seriously can't take it! Paul is like a little puppy! Adorable. I vote that Noah puts some vampires in their place! All the staring and shit has to be annoying. So yeah...WE'RE NOT GONNA TAKE IT! NO! WE AIN'T GONNA TAKE IT! WE'RE NOT GONNA TAKE IT, ANYMORE!!! I had that in my head at the end of the chapter. lol UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!! :D
    January 2nd, 2013 at 10:50am
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